This drawing is very good! :)
But I think it wouldn't work for the "newres" challenge, because you changed to much the point of view.
https://jazzastudios.com/2016/01/06/january-2016-challenge-of-the-month/
"Your high definition re-creation must be on the same angle and include the same poses and basic proportions, but you can of course make your recreation in your own style and with some creative license." That's what is written in the site (click the link).